The vocals are too quiet though. Other than that its groovy
Yeah that seems to be the overwhelming opinion even outside of newgrounds, ah well what can you do. Thanks for the compliment though!
Very cool for a video game
Its perfect for level music just not for pleasure listening
Guitar is cool
But definitely needs drums. Also replacing the vocalist wouldn't hurt either. The entire song the vocalist is out of key. It would be much funnier if vocalist sounded better. Potential here just needs a decent singer and drums then I'll be rocking and laughing
thanks for the review man! very helpful.
Sounds to much like toys
The effects are really corny and cheap sounding. The main riff is extremely boring and the song itself is way too long for how much is actually happening. Although the melody is nice there is too much of the same repeating. Has potential
Although this review has some amateur tips, it wasn't worth a 4, I can't see how you could actually give this a 4.
Thanks for the review I guess.
The vocals and the melody are chill with excellent EQ. The vocal progression is a little boring and the lyrics are vague and cliche. Thats not to say I don't like it
Perhaps I am not the most original lyricist but that's what came out when I tried to speak.
Also I was thinking about it and if you think the lyrics are vague then odds are you don't know what I'm getting at and therefore wouldn't know if they are cliche or not ;)
Thanks for the review
Its funny but has a good melody. Sounds like a mix of the cure and Flight of the Concords rated R style. Nice work
I can hear you breathing in the mic alot and loud. Piano is nice but your voice is weak and is not always on key. I also don't like the vocal melody. Io don't think it fits just intrudes
I like it although it could use a little EQ. Some of the midi is annoying the beeps in particular. Original
Specifically the breakdown. Transitions are also good. As well as a decent melody
lol why, thank you :)
But that's about it. There is no change or a decent melody. Its unsurprising. I feel like Ive heard the whole song in ten seconds. Points for being unique
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