BahBahBurten's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Strawberry Jam!]

Definitely cool

The vocals are too quiet though. Other than that its groovy

trabajaba7 responds:

Yeah that seems to be the overwhelming opinion even outside of newgrounds, ah well what can you do. Thanks for the compliment though!

[mhb - Pimp Hand]

Guitar is cool

But definitely needs drums. Also replacing the vocalist wouldn't hurt either. The entire song the vocalist is out of key. It would be much funnier if vocalist sounded better. Potential here just needs a decent singer and drums then I'll be rocking and laughing

mhb responds:

thanks for the review man! very helpful.

[[dB] I'm the Good Guy]

Sounds to much like toys

The effects are really corny and cheap sounding. The main riff is extremely boring and the song itself is way too long for how much is actually happening. Although the melody is nice there is too much of the same repeating. Has potential

Decibel responds:

Although this review has some amateur tips, it wasn't worth a 4, I can't see how you could actually give this a 4.

Thanks for the review I guess.

[.with every breath.]

Very coo

The vocals and the melody are chill with excellent EQ. The vocal progression is a little boring and the lyrics are vague and cliche. Thats not to say I don't like it

VegetarianMeat responds:

Perhaps I am not the most original lyricist but that's what came out when I tried to speak.

Also I was thinking about it and if you think the lyrics are vague then odds are you don't know what I'm getting at and therefore wouldn't know if they are cliche or not ;)

Thanks for the review

[IL Harmor Sample]

Cool

Specifically the breakdown. Transitions are also good. As well as a decent melody

Treysen responds:

lol why, thank you :)

[Supremus]

Very boring

Needs a solid progression of some kind. It sounds like one thing is happening and a few other single things are happening around it. Kinda chaotic with no direction. Cool effects though

Yahaz responds:

Thank you for the review! Its always good to have someones opinion to know where to improve, ill try to work on something with more flow next time.

[In Bliss]

Good for a video game level

and thats about it. Otherwise its way too ambient and in outer space for anything else. It doesn't sound like alot of effort was put into the structure. Everything is just single waning notes and none progress other than in dynamics. But even then not very much. Potential here for sure.

JLozano072192 responds:

Thank you for your intellectual criticism. The reason why I like ambient music is because proper musical structure is not neccessary.

It's funny you mention that it is good for a video game level. I am trying to be a producer for film scores and video games.

Thank you again for your comment, I am interested in more.

[boogworthy 2]

Unique

Thats all there is to say

Tarteviant responds:

Thank you :) thats all I wanted to hear lol

[Always Leave Me Down]

????

I'm not sure I understand the purpose of the incessant machine noise in the background. The voice isn't attached to anything and the piano sounds like a kids toy. This in my opinion isn't music its noise. If that's what you were goin for then kudos but even then it isn't any good

rebelofwar responds:

That's exactly what I was going for. Dude, it's noise some people will like it and some people won't it pretty much has to be an acquired taste. If you don't like it, that's fine.

[Shades Of Amber]

Coo

IT would've been a ten but the start was very abrupt. Otherwise awesome

seatellite responds:

thanks. and yeah the start was unfortunately abrupt, but I did such a good take I didn't want to do it over.