Nice but
Its a little drawn out and the intro is kinda long. The layering of riffs is cool but the onset should probably be quicker. Overall it aint bad
Nice but
Its a little drawn out and the intro is kinda long. The layering of riffs is cool but the onset should probably be quicker. Overall it aint bad
I suppose it's a little long, but I just didn't feel right just jumping into the "orchestra" part. It's the build up that is essential to this song.
Thanks
Needs more
Its too repetitive and drawn out. Its the same progression for 2 minutes. You voice is a little weak and off key a parts. The harmony only serves to make the song messy. There is heart in this song which is good. the music surrounding it needs improvement
Thank you very Much for the review. The song actually has 3 parts which it go through, not just one. My voice isnt the strongest becasue im mostly just a guitarist but this is when i get too have some fun and try to write my own music. Thank you very much though and I will take youre comments into consideration adn improve my writing.
Its cool
Not much I dont like here. Its intense and creative. Fun to listen to
Excellent. I'm glad you enjoy it.
coo
Interesting and very unique
Thank you very much
Good Tune
The voice stands out like a sore thumb. Its really dry and rough when the rest of the music sounds cleaned and presentable. That being said I think you do have a decent voice its just needs a little polish when on a recording
hey man totally agree, the singer is a massive bell end anyways haha but that wasnt me singing. He used to be a great singer aswell, but now he's just a arrogant little butt hole.
thanks for the review tho bro, really appreciate it. I havent been on newgrounds in years, so im gonna get round to uploading my new material soon. its hilarious listening to this old crap :)
I like it
You got good melody on the indie side.
thanks you
Groovy
Haha to the last comment and coo to the song
Agreed.
Good
I like the voice the most but overall ees goood
woop ^_^
Agreed needs imporvement
It still is good just needs improvement
will do :) Thank you :)
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