No good
This style of rap is no good. It has nothing to do with the way you right the song it just is a poor quality style. There is no melody which makes the structure concrete and beams without any walls or a roof. Its poor rap as well. The lyrics sound like you are just talking to yourself. The don't follow any real rhythm but there own. I gave a 2 because of effort and sound quality of the track as far as EQ is concerned. Otherwise this is a style the needs to be abandoned