Needs Work
The harmony voices need adjusting. The sound out of key and they fight each other instead of helping. It makes it hard to hear what you are saying. Otherwise its a touching tune despite a cliche lines. I would say the only thing that needs help is the voice. Practice Practice Practice
Okay
Nice lyrics but the guitar is fairly stoic. I most cases if the melody is decent it wouldn't matter. In this case however your voice is very plain with very little range and poor dynamics. I would recommend daily vocal exercises and push your limits often. Your are on key which is a plus you just sound like you are running out of air. All in all it shows promise.
Coo
Reminds me of the days when Nintendo was it
interesting and coo
The bass makes the song in my opinion
Coo
Too short though. it seemed like you were on to something then it ended abruptly
Wierd but awesome
Thats about the gist of it
Ahh
Annoying and chaotic
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Carson City NV
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